16 Stone

16 Stone and what do you get
His name is Adebayo and he demands respect
They call him the Beast and he could swallow you whole
He will eat all your pies and score more goals

 

You kind of lost it in the last bit there Guywanderer.......It's got potential though.

 

Yes it needs a bit of fine tuning

 

Ok I've changed the last line

 

Does it span better with just one "and what do you" in the first line? And maybe "some" before "goals" in the last line?

 

I was going to say that Ron....

Much better Guywanderer. Probably a litlle tiny bit more tweaking perhaps but I can see this heading for publication soon. Perhaps you could do something with lines one, two, three and four. Sure it will be perfect then.

 

Didn't see I put that in twice must be old age

 

Any ideas for tweaking or twerking will be much appreciated

 

Feel free to sing it tonight Ron

 

Got himself sent off

 

He is certainly in the press a lot which can't do any harm.

 

Worth his weight in gold

 

I saw you'd made another post on this thread you created and thought you had been working on the poetry.........what a let down.

 

Adebayo oh oh oh
Adebayo oh oh oh
He weighs 16 stone
Scoring goals away and at home

 

Erm..........got a feeling that by the time you get the poem right he's probably going to have put on weight and it'll be back to the drawing board again.

 

Adey must have been training hard yesterday cos I felt the tremor in Stokenchurch

 

If nothing else he could earn his wages in publicty

 

So falling down is still a part of Ainsworth's training regime then?